Sunday, November 8, 2009

Who's Calling?


I sure would like to know who’s calling and hanging up on me! Last night, the first crank call came in just as I reached that pleasing limbo state between consciousness and sleep—I was so rattled! Then, this morning the shrill ring of the kitchen phone, right at the crucial moment when I went to flip my egg over-easy, causing me to break the yoke. I answered the phone, meantime the broken yolk cooked all hard in the hot pan, and I like them runny. On the third call, the culprit rang my BlackBerry. I was driving down Sunset Boulevard, and answered despite the new law, which forbids a person from talking in a car without a headset. I kept saying hello over and over, like an idiot, not realizing it was the same jerk. Nobody answered. Just air. From one of those restricted numbers—the worst. Good thing some diligent cop eager to write a ticket didn’t spot me holding that BlackBerry to my ear.

Could it be that guy I met at the party the other night? No way, we obviously hit it off. He said I was exactly what he was looking for, and then asked for my number. Why on earth would he go through all the trouble of calling, just to hang up?

It might be that ghastly Chelsea Topper. The woman I’ve repeatedly snubbed, the tub of lard that recently joined my power-walking group. Her cheery inquisitiveness is beyond annoying. I hate it when she asks if I’d like to tag along to charity functions that I could never be the least bit interested in, when she pesters me to tell her where I buy my clothes and rudely asks how much I paid. Tacky questions that I give the wrong answers to. I don’t want to show up and find that frumpy woman wearing the same outfit as me! Anyway, it’s not Chelsea’s style to keep her mouth shut. It can’t be her!

Maybe it’s Gloria Smythe from work. I’m sure she’s more than a little fed up with me because I continue to outshine her on a daily basis. Since she’s my boss with access to my file and telephone numbers—that would explain a lot. It hasn’t escaped my attention how totally jealous Gloria is about all the attention others in the office give me because they prefer my company to hers. I’m always invited out for lunch and for drinks after hours, while she sits alone at her computer doing God only knows what. It just might be her.

My big sister is perfectly capable of this kind of behavior. I shouldn’t rule her out either. Clare wouldn’t be above picking up the phone, dialing my number, and hanging up just for the heck of it. It’s her mission in life to poke holes through my supremacy in the sibling pecking order. I’ve always been a thorn in her side, since the day I was born. It’s not my fault that I’m Daddy’s little girl. That I turned out to be four inches taller and at least twenty-five pounds thinner than she is. It’s not anybody’s fault but her own, (my son’s an entertainment lawyer with a lovely high-rise condo in Century City), while her children are a pair of losers with a capital L. Her daughter’s practically a crack whore out in Yucca Valley, and her son mows lawns and trims trees for a living out in The Valley somewhere. No wonder she’s bitter.

I don’t know what I’m going to do if this keeps up, I really don’t. It’s a terrible thing when I answer that ring and meet dead silence on the other end of the line, a terrible, terrible thing. I’m barely able to tolerate this quiet house. Since my husband had a mid-life crisis, (I call it a nervous breakdown), and gave up his career as a TV commercial director to dump me for Jesus and move down to El Salvador to become some kind of goody-two-shoes missionary, I’ve been forced to live alone up here in the hills above the city. I leave the radio on at night. It’s just too damn scary without some kind of noise in the background besides crickets chirping and the furnace going on and off and water pipes banging and clanging. I think I’ll sell this drafty old house, (even though it's a perfect example of early Los Angeles glamor and was once owned by film actress Etta Dawson.) I'll buy a high-rise condo in my son’s building, where I can feel safe.

Whoever’s making these calls is diabolical, not a good person at all. They’re trying to throw me off, trying to scare me. It’ll take a lot more that a few hang up calls to freak me out, I can tell you that. A woman living alone is such a target, and I am getting older, but am still extremely attractive. This isn’t funny at all, the idea that someone is having a good old time at my expense. I suppose I could change my numbers. But that would be an inconvenience—so why should I? I don’t intend to give this prankster the satisfaction. I just won’t.

The next time the phone rings I’m going to scream BUG OFF ASSHOLE into the receiver at the top of my lungs. That ought to fix who’s calling!

(A work of fiction, based on a client from my past--not autobiographical by any means!)


All Rights Reserved. © 2009 by Elizabeth Bradley.

18 comments:

Elspeth Antonelli said...

You've created a very precise portrait of a rather sad woman. What a lonely life she has; though everyone else's fault, of course, not her own! Beautifully done, Elizabeth.

Elspeth

Jemi Fraser said...

Elspeth's right on - this is a great portrait - we know her. :)

Helen Ginger said...

It is a very good portrait. I hope you use her as a character. We know her, and I, for one, do not like her.

Helen
Straight From Hel

Alix said...

OMG! Chelsea Topper sounds like a nightmare. Reminds me of the song "Whatchamacallit" by the Pusseycat Dolls...

http://www.playlist.com/searchbeta/tracks#pussycat%20dolls%20whatchamacallit

Fun song, even for us old broads.

Gloria Smythe? Big Sis? The Crack Whore?

So many wonderful possibilities for restraining orders. You need a bodyguard, Britney. LOL!

lakeviewer said...

Ah, and this is just the beginning! Good hook.

ellen abbott said...

You really had me going there but half way through I realized that it had to be a fiction piece. Now I wanna read the rest! You are such a tease!

Elizabeth Spann Craig said...

Good job! You had me going for a little while, too. In my mystery writing world, Chelsea sounds like the perfect victim...

Elizabeth
Mystery Writing is Murder

♥ Boomer ♥ said...

Great writing! Terrific roller-coaster ride -- screaming all the way! ♥

Shirley Wells said...

Wonderfully written, Elizabeth. Can't wait to read more!

Alix said...

Elizabeth, my Queen...

Please swing by Casa Hice when you have a minute and pick up the award I left for you...

jinksy said...

Over here, dead silence for the first few moments, is often followed by a a distinctly Asian sounding voice, which seems a million miles away, trying to get you to sign up for some crummy deal or another! Definitely annoying, but at least not scary.

staceyjwarner said...

LOL, I was confused at first. I had a guy sending me pornographic pictures on my phone. I called him up and said if you do it again I'll call the police.

I never heard from him again.
LOL!

Glynis said...

I was hooked, I was getting worried about you Elizabeth. Then I read further, and realised that it was a great descriptive piece of writing.

Mr. Shife said...

I was getting a little worried that somebody was harassing you then I realized you were doing some of your great fiction. Love it. Thanks for sharing.

Debbie said...

I am soooo relieved this is not autobiographical! You had me a tad worried:)

Journaling Woman said...

Whew, I thought it was you. You pulled me in and I couldn't stop reading. That's what it's all about. uh huh!!

Marguerite said...

Your vivid imagination is only exceeded by your fabulous writing skills! Bravo, cher! Enjoyed it!

Jan Morrison said...

I'm there - keep going! I want to know who it is and why they are torturing this poor woman. I don't understand why your other commentors don't have more sympathy for her. She's just trying to do her best in a hard world and her husband! What a chump!